My poem, Respectfully Submitted, was aimed at a very specific audience. Upon further examination, maybe too specific. I wanted to write a poem accessible for everyone to enjoy but also as a tribute to the founders of my fraternity.
I understand your poem now. I think the suggestion that was made for you to use a clue in the title would help any reader understand what your piece is truly about.
Like I said, we're apparently all about using the title lately. There isn't anything wrong with having a specific audience, but it needs to be understood by a wider audience, too.
I liked it centered, actually. It read like a book dedication that way.
I understand your poem now. I think the suggestion that was made for you to use a clue in the title would help any reader understand what your piece is truly about.
ReplyDeleteLike I said, we're apparently all about using the title lately. There isn't anything wrong with having a specific audience, but it needs to be understood by a wider audience, too.
ReplyDeleteI liked it centered, actually. It read like a book dedication that way.